Molly C's Whitelist Application :)

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CherryPancakes3
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Molly C's Whitelist Application :)

Post: # 15291Post CherryPancakes3 »

-Player Questions-
Minecraft Username: CherryPancakes3
Discord Username: (If applicable! To help us contact you if we need to) SobaBoba#6969
Age: 16
Where did you hear about us: (If it was from a friend it helps to say which one) From a website showing Harvestcraft servers.
Tell us a little about yourself: I love to play Minecraft and draw, play music, and listen to true crime podcasts. I also have kittens and 3 pet rats.

-Roleplay Questions-
[ Please use your own words. ]
What is roleplaying? Becoming someone else entirely for the sake of a story/expirience.
What is meta-gaming? Understanding how the game works and using that to influence your character's actions.
What is power-gaming / god-modding? Taking control of someone else's character, not an ideal situation.
What is retroactive continuity? When someone acts in the past, but keeps the flow of the story.
What is the difference between in-character (IC) and out-of-character (OOC)? IC means you are currently acting as that character, OOC means you are not, and being yourself.
Do you have previous experience playing on a RP server? (This won’t affect your acceptance) On Discord yes, for short amounts of time but they fell through sadly. I know how to RP though, and am eager to learn whatever I don't know.

-General Character Questions-
[There is a one full paragraph (at least 5 sentences) minimum for the appearance, biography, and personality. This is for each of these parts and not put together. Your first character must come from a region that isn't Toro.]
Full name: Soba Murphy
Age: 16
Appearance: Long brown hair wrapped around their shoulder. A red beanie dons their head. They have long-sleeve yellow shirt. They also wear black pants. Grey sneakers don their feet as well.
Personality: Cheerful and helpful, they always want to be of service to those who deserve it. They love to play music and draw. They are often brought down with feelings of helplessness and not feeling useful or having purpose. They overcome these feelings with coping mechanisms like art, and talking about it. They can persevere like no other
Biography: From the Alola region, they often dream of the big leagues. From a single mother household, and have no siblings. They often did well in school, but nothing exceptional. They trained feverishly with their Riolu and always adored the idea of being at the top of the trainers. Their dad left when they were 7, and that leaves some scars.
Flaws: Often too sensitive and sometimes overly needy. They often hold people to perfect standards that are unfair. Deeply wants to have a rough childhood, but actually had a lovely one, aside from their Dad leaving.
Ambitions: They have the classic dream of making it big in the pokemon leagues, but also wants to be a fashion designer for matching human and pokemon clothing.
Starter Pixelmon: [ Any naturally level 5 Pokemon! No Legendaries/Mythicals ] Riolu, if not that then Froakie :)
Skin: (Please include a screenshot of the front and back or the skin itself.)
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-Open Response Questions-
-Write in third person!-
[Respond to at least 2 of the 3 scenarios. There is a one full paragraph (at least 5 sentences) minimum for each of the scenarios you choose, and responses must be written in third person and formatted like RP instead of a description. Like: ' Steve focuses on the girl with a gasp and asks, " How can I help? " ' other than ' Steve would answer the call to help the cat! Feel free to make responses for the NPC in order to meet this requirement.]

You find yourself standing in a bustling town. Suddenly, a small girl runs up to you, her eyes seeming to glisten with fresh tears as her bottom lip quivers. “Please!” She cries out to you, “You must help me! My poor Meowth is stuck in a tree!” She points to a nearby tree as more tears spill out of her eyes and down her cheeks. How does your character respond?

"Oh, um, yes I'll help!" Soba says, surprised. They proceed to comfort the girl, asking "How did they get stuck up there?" After listening to the girl's story, they decide its best to scale the tree and bring the Meowth down themselves. Climbing the tree was difficult, but doable. Hissing and scratching, the Meowth is safely brought down to the little girl.


After arriving in Toro a cheerful woman walks up to you, a clipboard in her hand. “Hello and welcome to Toro! I would like to ask where you came from and why you came, as well as where you plan to go. All for for statistical reasons of course.” she asked with a bright smile as she held a pen to her clipboard. How does your character respond?


You are walking along the road when your eyes lock onto a trainer's in the distance. At that moment, you both freeze in place. You see a glimmer in the trainer's eyes as he reaches for his Pixelball. "Go, Rattata! Show this chump what we've been training for!" the trainer shouts as he swiftly releases his chosen partner in the vacant space that separates the two of you. How does your character respond?

"Aww Rattata, cute! I absolutely love rodent pokemon!" Soba gushes. "I'd be happy to battle you, and hopefully teach you to have a better attitude when challenging a fellow trainer" They say with a wink. Soba cries, "Riolu! Come on out!" And summons their Riolu from the depths of their handbag. A battle ensues, and Soba comes out victorious. "Thank you for the battle!" Soba says with a smile.
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Misha
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Re: Molly C's Whitelist Application :)

Post: # 15301Post Misha »

Hi! We appreciate your interest and patience. There a few things that need to be fixed up before we can accept ya. I'll get to it so you don't have to wait any longer--

• The descriptions for Metagaming and Retroactive Continuity are not what we're looking for. I'm sure if you search it up you'll get good descriptions, just make sure to use your own words.
• Appearance is technically five sentences, but they read a bit more like a list rather than full sentences so I'd like to see it expanded at least a little. If you're unsure what to add, maybe mention what their height, what sort of styles they lean towards, if they're thin or chubby or anything else, the sort of posture they have, etc.
• The biography feels like it has been cut a bit short. It seems they have a relatively tame life which is fine, but it at least needs to mention why and how they came to Toro in the biography. Maybe a tiny bit more details of what their life was like after their dad left at 7.

Besides those, the app and character seems fine! We'd love to have you! Once you've made the requested edits reply here or post in #the-waiting-room on Discord and we'll take another look!
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