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Blueh
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Joined: Wed Jul 20, 2016 10:07 am
MC name: Blueh

Blueh's Application

Post: # 11788Post Blueh »

—Player Questions—
Minecraft Username: Blueh
Age: 15
Where did you hear about us: I was searching for Pixelmon Roleplay servers on Google
Tell us a little about yourself: I'm a 15 year old boy who likes to play on Minecraft roleplays and I've loved Pokemon since I was a small child (about 6-7). I also like to read comic books and play RPGs.

—Roleplay Questions—
What is roleplaying? To play as a character in a certain setting. Kind of like acting, but roleplay is usually improvised, which means you would need to know your character very well when roleplaying as them.
What is meta-gaming? Meta-Gaming is when your character uses information that he/she does not yet know in roleplay.
What is power-gaming? When you force an action upon someone, for example *Jeff stabs Jill in the heart, causing her to die*.
What is retroactive continuity? Retroactive Continuity, or RetCon for short, is when someone changes a past plot which then changes the current plot, this usually messes everything up.
What is a Mary Sue? An unrealistically perfect character who can do almost anything possible.
What is the difference between in-character (IC) and out-of-character (OOC)? In-character is when you act as your character within a roleplay, but Out of character is the opposite, when you don't act at all and you're just being yourself, not paying any attention to your character's personality ect.
Do you have previous experience playing on a RP server? Yes, I'm currently active on 2 roleplay servers, (Herocraft and Elysium)

—In-Game Lore Questions (Please answer in your own words)—
Describe any city in Toro of your choosing: Virdis is the town of nature. Located in-between two forests, this peaceful hideaway town is home to the largest farm in Toro. People say that nothing goes bad in Virdis
Describe Pix Co.: Pix Co. is a huge company that specialises in many things such as education, healthcare and much more, but they're best known for the invention of the Pixelball.

—General Character Questions—
[ There is a one paragraph minimum for the appearance, biography, and personality ]
Full name: Wallace "Wally" Gordon
Age: 14
Appearance: Wally is looks younger than most people his age, he is 5"1, has blonde curly hair and is quite skinny. He has brown eyes. Wally also has an innocent look in his eyes.
Biography: Wally lived in Cerulean City, in Kanto. His parents were over protective and Wally was never allowed to leave the house alone, that all changed when his family had a picnic in Viridian forest when Wally was 10, they found a Bulbasaur. Wally's father captured the Bulbasaur and gave him to Wally to look after, Wally and Bulbasaur had been best friends ever since. But Wally's father had to move to Toro to work at one of Pix Co's many branches. So Wally's family moved there, though Wally wanted to stay in Kanto. As they arrived in Toro, Wally was enraged and ran away from his parents with his Bulbasaur. And that's where Wally's journey begins.
Personality: Wally is very shy and introverted, but his Bulbasaur encourages him every day to be better. Although Wally may seem shy, he's very thoughtful and caring and wouldn't hesitate to help someone.
Flaws: Because Wally hadn't been allowed outside, he never knew how to make friends, or how to be independent. This is bad for Wally, as he's now all alone with his Bulbasaur. He's also scared of the dark.
Ambitions: Wally wants to work at a Pixelmon Gym, or maybe even become a gym leader. He's always dreamed of becoming a gym leader ever since he was a small child.
Starter Pixelmon: Bulbasaur
Skin: (Please include front and back shot or the skin itself.) Image Image

—Open Response Questions—
[Respond to at least 2 of the 3 scenarios.]

You find yourself standing in a bustling town. Suddenly, a small girl runs up to you, her eyes seeming to glisten with fresh tears as her bottom lip quivers. “Please!” She cries out to you, “You must help me! My poor Meowth is stuck in a tree!” She points to a nearby tree as more tears spill out of her eyes and down her cheeks. How does your character respond?
Wally would send out his Bulbasaur, asking politely "Bulbasaur, could you please use your vines to get that Meowth out of that tree? Thank you." He would then put his hands on the girl's shoulder and tells her to be more careful with her Pixelmon.

After arriving in Toro a cheerful woman walks up to you, a clipboard in her hand. “Hello and welcome to Toro! I would like to ask where you came from and why you came, as well as where you plan to go. All for for statistical reasons of course.” she asked with a bright smile as she held a pen to her clipboard. How does your character respond?
Wally would say "I'm from K-Kanto.. and I'm here because.." his body would shake and he begins to sweat. He then runs away.
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Misha
Posts: 919
Joined: Sat Aug 23, 2014 2:55 pm
MC name: Mishpelled

Re: Blueh's Application

Post: # 11792Post Misha »

Hello! The name's Mish and I'm gonna be checking your app today~
I'll just point out what mistakes I see, and once you fix it I'll check it out again! 

• I would like you to just add how to prevent power-gaming in your actions~
• Your appearance needs to be expanded a bit to fit a paragraph! I recommend just adding a little bit about his clothing or how he presents himself.
• Your personality needs to be expanded a bit more too! Maybe talk about how he interacts with strangers, as well as he might interact with people he considers friends?
• The clothing style in your skin is just a tad bit strange. It vaguely reminds me of something a farmer might wear? If there's an explanation for this let me know~
- I would also like to note that this is a 1.7.10 server so body layers don't work. I recommend merging it before getting on the server~
• I'll need your open response responses expanded to at least a paragraph!

Once these are finished make sure to post a reply so I know. If you have any questions, problems, or concerns please feel free to post a reply, contact me in PMs, or contact me on Skype at Mishakiara! Hope to see this fixed soon, goodbye~
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Blueh
Posts: 2
Joined: Wed Jul 20, 2016 10:07 am
MC name: Blueh

Re: Blueh's Application

Post: # 11825Post Blueh »

Thanks, I'll fix it soon! :D
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Misha
Posts: 919
Joined: Sat Aug 23, 2014 2:55 pm
MC name: Mishpelled

Re: Blueh's Application

Post: # 11826Post Misha »

Alright, just make sure to reply again when you do!
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